Pure Imagination
James knew it would happen ever since he was given to her; after all, the life of an imaginary friend was never meant to be an easy one, he just wished those years wouldn't have gone by so fast. He remembered them all clear as day, helping her ride her bike, making macaroni art, and even playing pirates vs ninjas with her, but they were all just memories. He sighed as he looked to the sleeping girl. “Susan, do you remember Jimmy, the little boy who beat you up?” He laughed a little, “Do you remember how the next day I helped you get even with him and he didn't dare be in the same room as you for a whole year? … No, no of course you don't, but I do…”
He went back to looking at the floor. Why are you even sticking around anymore? He asked himself, You're not meant to stay forever. You've done your job, just move on! He cringed slightly at his own thoughts for they spoke a harsh truth. Heck, Susan was even scared of him at this point. She could see him out of the corner of her eye and in reflections from time to time. He had laughed when her friends tried to convince her that she had a ghost in her home, but sadness had overtaken when he realized she probably thought this the truth over the actual fact of the matter.
James shook himself slightly, trying to pull himself from the past, which was the only place he seemed to find comfort in now a days. He knew it would be hard; after all, most imaginary friends move on through dying, to save a child from one little mistake, like a ball going in the road or climbing a tree, but unfortunately for James, this never happened. He sighed and forced himself to his feet. This little internal debate of his had been at the forefront of his mind for years, but tonight his decision was finally clear. He took off a small necklace and held it fondly as glitter fell off of the little pieces of pasta. He allowed himself to be swallowed up by one last memory, but it didn't hurt this time. He smiled and placed the macaroni necklace on Susan’s nightstand, he couldn't take it where he was going, but she could…
And with that, years of joy and loneliness alike were almost ended as James climbed to the roof of the three story home. He decided to look at the stars as he did it to reassure himself. No matter where he went those would always stay the same. “Heh, maybe the view ‘ll be better there,” he chuckled before taking a step. He still stared at the stars as his body seemed to move in slow motion through the air. “I'm so happy I've had you James,” Susan's small, younger voice peeped up from the back of his head, “Thank you, I'll miss you.” And with a sickening crunch as his body hit the ground he whispered out, “And I you.”
James sat up in a daze. Nothing on him hurt, it wasn't meant to for his kind. Death was just a gateway to new opportunity. He cautiously stood up, taking in the wooded forest that now engulfed him. He smiled at the sounds of birds singing and water trickling from a nearby stream, but another sound soon caught his attention. He followed the soft muffled sounds of sobs until he reached a small crying boy who was far too young to be out in the woods alone. James knelt down beside him and smiled reassuringly. “Hello there,” he said quietly as to not scare the boy, “My name is James, what's yours?”
Awe. Everyone in my class just said "Aweeee." That was a good story, and a good plot.
ReplyDeleteIt's a really good story, and I liked the part when she decides she doesn't need him anymore because she is strong enough.
ReplyDeleteGood story I lite the whole imagination part and how they are actually there.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy this story, it is so good
ReplyDeleteThat was a great story I remember my imaginary friend I lost him to a passing car just a year ago?
ReplyDeleteThis story was so touching. I love reading it from the perspective of the imaginary friend. The little details add so much, like that glitter macaroni necklace...they must make these in every elementary class in America because I remember making one, too. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good and interesting story.
ReplyDeleteI liked the plot and the point of view it was from. I love the opening line I can relate that to my own life.
ReplyDeleteGood idea to go from an imaginary friend's POV
ReplyDeleteinteresting perspective and touching
ReplyDeleteAll the hints iluding to just how much our imaginary friends care, and how they save us when we're young, and how they constantly try to reach out to us really made an impact on how the story is told. It was sad, yet oddly happy to read this from the imaginary friend's point of view, and I'm really impressed by this work.
ReplyDeleteGreat story. Nice to have a reminder of the old imaginary friends we all used to have.
ReplyDeleteVery cool story and characters
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story. I enjoyed it! I love the imaginary friend part of the story.
ReplyDeleteVery well written story! Love it.
ReplyDeleteLove me some Pinterest ideas😉I find this to relateable because we all have imaginary friends when we are little and it also reminds me of how we have to make new friends as we grow up. One of my favorite stories so far
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the perspective of the imaginary friend
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good and interesting story.
ReplyDeleteIt was a very creative story
ReplyDeleteLiked how it was from Imaginary Friends POV. Great Read!!!
ReplyDeleteWe can all relate to having an imaginary friend. Great story!
ReplyDeleteThis is an extremely creative story, very original.
ReplyDeleteI liked how they used the imaginary friends point of view
ReplyDeleteI liked the way the story was narrated
ReplyDeleteThis story is really cute.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet story. I love how he moved on to a new kid to help him out.
ReplyDeleteVery cool story and I like how they used the perspective from the imaginary friend
ReplyDeleteVery well written!!
ReplyDeleteThis was by far one of my favorite stories. It made me feel the full range of emotions, it was heartbreaking yet full of love and hope. Very well written!
ReplyDeleteLove the imaginary friend idea, really good story.
ReplyDeleteI like the imaginary friend idea, it was original
ReplyDeleteVery well written.
ReplyDeleteVery nice friend I want to meet him
ReplyDeletewas very good and didn't expect the imaginary friend. Very good story
ReplyDeleteI love how the imaginary friend transitions to another boy when he knows he has done his job.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the imagination in this
ReplyDeleteImaginary friends are the best
ReplyDeleteWow, this story was pure imagination.
ReplyDeleteI wish I had an imaginary friend because I don't think the real ones like me.
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