Monday, February 6, 2017

#26 The Day That Changed Beth's Life

The Day That Changed Beth’s Life


Don't take things for granted. The day that changed Beth’s life. Let’s just start from the beginning of Beth’s day. So Beth day was normal basically, so she thought. She had her friends and her boyfriend. She doesn’t really talk to people besides her friends. She went through the whole day just like usual like at lunch she would sit by her boyfriend Drake, Sarah her best friend, and Sarah’s boyfriend Lucas. But as she went through her classes like usual they were still the same.
After school all four of them went to Sarah’s house to hang out before the boys had to leave for there game. They both kissed their boyfriends goodbye and said, “See you at the game." Then Sarah and Beth got ready for the game. They stopped at Casey’s so Beth could get her daily Mountain Dew slushie before they went to the game in Morrison. Then they were on your way to the game jamming to the radio and talking about their boyfriends. They soon got to the Morrison High School. Walked in when the boys were warming up. Soon the game started and Beth and Sarah sat down to watch. Through the whole game Sarah and Beth were cheering and screaming. They looked like they were having a great time. The boys had won that night by only eight points. After the boys were done and got out of the locker room. Sarah drove that night. So Lucas sat in the front seat by her and Beth sat in the back seat with Drake. They went to Mcdonalds to eat they ate there. They enjoyed their meal they all got chicken nuggets and fries. Then they left and were on our way home we were just listening to music and having fun in the car.
They were just going down the same road that they always do and just then Beth’s life changed. A deer came out right in front of Sarah swerved and the car rolled three times. Beth knew that things would change after that. She grabbed on to Drake tightly and wasn’t letting go. The car rolled once twice and the third time it land on the wheels. They were in a corn field and it was dark and foggy. Sarah’s car was damaged badly. Beth woke up in a hospital. She was shocked the doctor said that she just has a broken arm and a concussion. Beth’s mom was in the room and after the doctor left. The first words out of Beth’s mouth were, “Where are they?" Her mom tells her to calm down. Beth breaks down in tears and her mom comes over and sits by her and says, “They are all dead."

40 comments:

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  2. Very abrupt ending, and I was expecting it, nice story.

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  3. That stupid deer! I liked how blunt the ending was

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  4. That was sad, so bluntly said too.

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  5. I like how she just came straight out and said it, really show character!

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  6. This was very very sad I know what it feels like to hit a deer

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  7. Amazing but sad story.

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  8. Sad story, Loved it!

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  9. I like how realistic this is. You never know when your life will change, and you can loose people in an instant. And the character development really shows, as the protagonist is foreshadowing how here life changes.

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  10. Sad story. Wasn't expecting the ending.

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  11. Sad story. I can relate to see a deer while driving and how scary it can be.

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  12. This is a very sad story. Anything can happen and change your life at any time. Great moral!

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  13. I like how this cam happen at anytime. I loved the story.

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  14. Very sad story, didn't expect the ending

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  15. Very sad story, but I like how Beth grabbed on to Drake when the car was rolling.

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  16. Shocking ending, very sad story.

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  17. Wasn't expecting the ending.

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  18. Very sad story, didn't expect the ending

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  19. I liked how abrupt the ending was, and how this story really showed how our lives could really end at any minute

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  20. I was expecting the ending but it was very realistic

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  21. Very sad didn't expect the ending!

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  22. Good all around story

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  23. Very sad I like how you ended it so suddenly! But Great!!

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  24. Good story, the ending was my favorite part.

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  25. That was a Great ending ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿผ

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  26. Wow her life was changed she doesn't have one any more

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  27. The ending was sad

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  28. Well her life was definitely changed .....

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  29. That ending!!!!! So sad. But I think it's a good lesson about how dangerous driving really is. Going too fast, a deer (or any animal) running in front of your car, and just like that, everything changes. It's a reminder to slow down and be aware while driving at all times. :)

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  30. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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  31. That was sad ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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  32. Sad story because that could actually happen

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  33. Sad story but I liked it

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  34. Very sad story. Much sad.

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  35. Wow I wasn't expecting that ending

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